QUOTE(everettbumstead @ Feb 6 2010, 11:07 AM)

theres nothing necessarily wrong, but to make it better id say that the lightings pretty flat, its a simple composition at night on a relatively small rail, some really crisp lighting would make it alot nicer. but nice work taking your stuff into snow first time
i disagree the lighting doesnt seem flat to me. the only thing i would change is the fact that your kinda losing the left arm into the darkness other than that perfect lighting. maybe id crop off a little of the bottom of this