This is the shit that i want to be critiqued!

i dont like the flat blue behind it i dont know ehat you would put in lue of that but you can figure that out

o i just threw that in there but i was thinking of putting some like crazy fly-by shots in the background...the thing is i just dont have any footage or anything so i had to stick with that

get a vignette on the background. maybe (if you dont go for the crazy fly-by shots) add some slightly moving spray in the back too. and i would change the colors. but well done knaackg.

A slight vignette would look real ill. I think you should make the difference between the bubbles greater, maybe make the black ones wobble a bit or something.

what program did you do this in?

Maybe add some ink dribbles, that move whilst its fly past.

looks sick

that looks really cool. i think if you made it so that the background was black but with like a spotlight on the titles?? maybe i dunno it's pretty cool like that though

its really cool but some of the words were hard to read

It looks real sick the only thing is the last text with the montage name was hard to read.

that would help it alot^

and also in footage i could see it looking way sicker. but really good job dude looks great

where would you get one of those soft vignettes? or is it up to myself to make one?

you can make them in after effects. Effect>generate>circle, and then you just soften the edges.

good thing i have after effects...

you dont need after effects. you can do it in your editing program.

i use pinnacle studio. it's like one step up from wmm

ya nevermind.

change or put more detail into the background, way too flat and more detail into the dots would help alot. if you put more time into detail it will come out soo much better

so sick but i think they moved a little quick it was hard to focus on

show the title for a split second longer, and your golden.

remember, not everybody reads as fast as you.

does he even post on here anymore?

i remmber him posting something not to long ago i was surprised to see it but it was only one post then he was outty.
EDIT: nvm i take back what i said.

not bad i like the ink splatter but i think you should change the blue background to liek a white and change the text colors and ink splatter colors