sambine
Mar 19 2007, 08:40 AM
derekDIPSET
Mar 19 2007, 10:20 AM
not bad. very simple and i like that. nice choice of colors
JasonH
Mar 19 2007, 10:25 AM
theyre alright, but on the second one, the big black thing in the middle doesnt really go
FilmerD
Mar 19 2007, 10:26 AM
The tips and tails on each would work well as top sheet graphics, I just can't see the graphics in the middle working though...
sambine
Mar 19 2007, 10:28 AM
It's the " Chateau Frontenac" in quebec city .... but wath do you think I can change? Union is a Quebec Snowboard brand it's for that...
Johnny Boy
Mar 19 2007, 08:36 PM
It has a lot of good mellow colors and good logo placements and what not. The bold black doesn't go well. The 2nd one is superb though. I can't tell from that size of a picture, but maybe you should have the little saint thing flip flop like a pattern through out it.
FilmerD
Mar 20 2007, 10:09 AM
I'd say if you want to use buildings, try making the entire topsheet a city scape. I'm sure that building is instantly recognizable to you, but to me, it just looks like a big blocky splotch.
ben
Mar 30 2007, 01:19 AM
looks pretty sick exept im not feeling the huge writing in the middle where it says the size and stuff, should maybe make it a bit smaller and not so bold
mitch
Apr 21 2007, 09:58 PM
nice. i like it.
i like how you're going for the simple and soft colour look.
kvxa
Aug 7 2007, 06:01 PM
i like it. i knew you were a French man soon as i looked at it....
Benji Pond
Aug 8 2007, 11:16 AM
yeah def make more of the city scape, maybe like the 2 or 3 building s next to that main building so it has some contrast rather then looking like a black blob
gzsnow906
Aug 8 2007, 12:00 PM
that black blob is a building??
JasonH
Aug 8 2007, 12:16 PM
yeah looks more like a black blob to me but I guess I can kind of see a building
Benji Pond
Aug 8 2007, 12:39 PM
even whn they do shadows of like the twin towers they include some of the surrounding buldings it gives depth
FilmerD
Aug 15 2007, 01:45 PM
I'd try to make the building more of a vector, rather than just being a big black thing. Giving it more detail would definitely look cooler and give it better depth. You might also be able to get away with not having to do a cityscape that way.
Benji Pond
Aug 15 2007, 11:06 PM
i still think including some smaller buildings would be better. def some contrast is needed, idea above mine is good, if you leave it like it is, it looks retarded
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